KISS and Tell: How to create captivating E-shots
At Changeworks, we produce many e-shots and e-newsletters for our clients that achieve phenomenal open rates – up to 55%. This significantly exceeds the 10-15% average, but how do we do this?
The first rule of thumb when producing e-shots lies merely in a KISS:
Keep It Simple Stupid!
Research claims that the average person is aware of seeing or hearing over 1,400 promotional messages each day and ignores virtually all of them. There are endless amounts of e-shots that include far too much copy, appear way too clunky and have the reader thinking, “So what!” – at which point the e-shot has a front row seat to their deleted items folder.
So how can you captivate your audience by keeping it simple?
Back to basics:
- Use short sentences (10-15 words)
- Use plain English (no academic terminology)
- Make it easy to scan read (use bullet points where possible)
Your audiences live just as busy lives as you do. They don’t always have time to read lengthy articles. In fact, you only have a matter of seconds to grab their attention and the first thing they see is the subject line.
5 Top Tips for Effective Subject Lines:
1. Spark curiosity in the reader – make them want to find out more
2. Include the main benefit of your product/service – customers do not buy for the product, they buy for the outcome
3. Ideally get points 1 and 2 in your subject line
4. Keep them less than 50 characters to reduce spam
5. Use active verbs i.e. get, see how, claim your
The most important thing to remember is ‘what’s in it for them?’
Subject lines make up the first part of the AIDCA process – a popular marketing tool used during planning stages. A breakdown of this model will help you to create ideas for content and structure your material.
For a captivating e-shot, AIDCA is the solution:
Attention – What outcome, change or improvement can you offer them that will grab their interest and make them want to find out more? (Subject line)
Interest – What aspects or features of your product/service deliver these outcomes or improvements above? (Banner and first section of your e-shot)
Desire – What can you write/use to make the outcomes irresistible to the reader? (Pictures, case studies, recommendations etc)
Conviction – What evidence can you use to make the reader believe it’s all true? (Testimonials, approvals, qualifications etc)
Action – What do you want the reader to do? (Call, email, visit your website, order a catalogue?)
These are just a few tips to help you with the basics of creating a captivating e-shot. In Part 2, I will focus more in depth on communication and how you can build better relationships with prospective customers.
If you can’t wait for Part 2 and you would like to speak to one of us here at Changeworks, please call us on 01785 247588 or email info@changeworkscom.co.uk







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